Last winter vacation, I went to Namhansanseong in seong-nam. There are a lot of atrraction like palace, a pine grove. But The landscape is not a main point of Namhansanseong. To enjoy this place really, You have to know history of this. Especially, This Mountain was last place of defense like Maginot Line in the Second World War.
There were many event in this place. But I will give you one event. I want to deal with our miraculous victory story in Namhan Mountain. When Manchuria(a sort of china) invade our country, we overpowered by them. And they moved forward behind Namhan Mountain fortress. But Despite such overwhelming odds against them, the Joseon(old name of Korea) side managed to resist for 47 days. And we keep off the enemy. After you know the story, try see the sight. In every place you can feel our ancestors’s trace.
I doubt some things in your wriiting.
답글삭제1. There are a lot of attraction like place.
> V/attractions
There were many event in this place
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2. But The landscape is not a main point of Namhansanseong.
But Despite such overwhelming odds against them.
> It is better not to use but at the first of a sentence and please check capital again.
3. Especially, This Mountain
> please check capital again.
4. And they moved forward behind Namhan Mountain fortress.
And we keep off the enemy.
> And is a coordinate conjunction. It is better to use within sentence.
I did not have a chance to visit Namhan Mountin before! your writing makes me want to go there! :>
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